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My House
. I find it not quite typical to live in my house. Do want to find out what’s intriguing? I live with both of my grandparents, dad (-), mom (-), brother (-), and Me. This is designed proportional to those bungalow houses you had seen. It was built way back in 1938, thus, it is still standing strong for 71 years. Imagine that! And because it could be considered as an ‘antique’ house, the exterior before was different. But after some years, we had given our house a new look the exterior of the house before was different, but since the house was really old and we had to give a new look from the outside and we decided to put siding in. We had also replaced our old windows to add a fresher look. Another thing that I like about it is that it had been established in a quiet neighborhood. Our house is also pretty close to school. That’s an advantage for me as a pupil studying there. Going in to the interior part of our house, it also has an amazing feature. It has three doors mainly used for our entrance (and exit). Of all those, my favorite door is the one we mostly use, that could take us to the kitchen. Speaking of which, we had nine rooms in our house. Specifically, we had four bedrooms, two bathrooms, an average-sized living room, dining room, and of course, my favorite, the kitchen. Adding to that, we also have a concrete basement. Could you imagine how spacious our house is? But if would be given a chance to re-model our house, I’d probably give much focus on the area of the bedrooms and the basement. And of course, the basement is too dark and horrible that a family of ghost could reside in it. Then there’s the hipped styles roof, and I really like it because it’s a old look of the house and not a lot of people now days have that kind of roof. My house was made for one-family house because there’s not that many bedrooms, or space. But about couple yards away we have the 2 car garage and that’s not attached too the house. But what about the persons residing in it? I am so glad to have a complete family residing in our two-storey house. I live with my complete family plus my loving grandparents.
In conclusion, I had realized that a house could be a place where you could treasure everything — old socks, delicious food, broken windows and etc. But most importantly, a house could treasure lifetime memories.
Positive-
Big living room
Big dining rooms
New bathrooms
Two stories
Very big yard
Negatives-
Old
The rooms are too small
Basement too cold
Closets too small
The one thing I like about my house it’s a very nice quiet neighborhood and the yard is really big, so during the summer I have friend over, and we go outside and have fun by playing sports and etc.
If I could change anything to the house it would probably be the bedrooms to be a little bigger although we have four bedrooms, they are too small for an individual. Basement to be fixed because like I said its pretty scary looking there right now.
The best memory that would associated to this house that I live in right now, it would be when we first moved in my uncle and his family had to live with us too, and we all had so much fun living together because we where so many people around the house and the time would go by really fest, just by talking to each other, playing games, and etc. So I think that would be the BEST memory about the house when my uncles family and us live together.
I loved reading about your house, your relatives,the neighborhood and all your memories. You’re a good writer. I have made several changes, as you read over it you’ll find them. Good Luck!
Living in my house is not like living in the typical house. Do you want to find out what’s intriguing? I live with both of my grandparents, dad (-), mom (-), brother (-), and Me. My home is designed proportional to those bungalow houses you have seen. It was built way back in 1938, thus, it is still standing strong for 71 years. Imagine that! And because it could be considered as an ‘antique’ house, the exterior before was different. But after some years, we have given our house a new look; the exterior of the house before was different, but since the house was really old and we had to give a new look from the outside, we decided to put siding in. We had also replaced our old windows to add a fresher look. Another thing that I like about it is that it has been established in a quiet neighborhood. Our house is also pretty close to school. That’s an advantage for me as a pupil studying there. Going in to the interior part of our house, it also has an amazing feature; it has three doors mainly used for our entrance (and exit). Of all those, my favorite door is the one we mostly use, that could take us to the kitchen. Speaking of which, we have nine rooms in our house. Specifically, we have four bedrooms, two bathrooms, an average-sized living room, dining room, and of course, my favorite, the kitchen. Adding to that, we also have a concrete basement. Can you imagine how spacious our house is? But if I would be given a chance to re-model our house, I’d probably give much focus on the area of the bedrooms and the basement. And of course, the basement is too dark and horrible that a family of ghost could reside in it. Then there’s the hipped style roof, and I really like it because it’s an old look of the house and not a lot of people now days have that kind of roof. My house was made for one-family house because there are not that many bedrooms, or space; however, about a couple of yards away we have the 2 car garage and that’s not attached to the house. The important part is what about the people residing in it? I am so glad to have a complete family residing in our two-story house. I live with my complete family plus my loving grandparents.
In conclusion, I have realized that a house can be a place where you can treasure everything — old socks, delicious food, broken windows and etc. But most importantly, a house can treasure lifetime memories.
The one thing I like about my house is the location it’s a very nice, quiet neighborhood and the yard is really big, so during the summer I have friends over, and we go outside and have fun by playing sports and etc.
If I could change anything to the house it would probably be the bedrooms to be a little bigger although we have four bedrooms, they are too small for an individual. The basement, as I said, its pretty scary looking there right now and desperately needs remodeling.
The best memory that would be associated to this house that I live in right now, would be when we first moved in, my uncle and his family had to live with us too, and we all had so much fun living together because there where always so many people around the house and the time would go by really fast, just by talking to each other, playing games, and etc. So I think that would be the BEST memory about the house, when my uncle’s family and my family all lived together.
I loved reading about your house, your relatives,the neighborhood and all your memories. You’re a good writer. I have made several changes, as you read over it you’ll find them. Good Luck!
Living in my house is not like living in the typical house. Do you want to find out what’s intriguing? I live with both of my grandparents, dad (-), mom (-), brother (-), and Me. My home is designed proportional to those bungalow houses you have seen. It was built way back in 1938, thus, it is still standing strong for 71 years. Imagine that! And because it could be considered as an ‘antique’ house, the exterior before was different. But after some years, we have given our house a new look; the exterior of the house before was different, but since the house was really old and we had to give a new look from the outside, we decided to put siding in. We had also replaced our old windows to add a fresher look. Another thing that I like about it is that it has been established in a quiet neighborhood. Our house is also pretty close to school. That’s an advantage for me as a pupil studying there. Going in to the interior part of our house, it also has an amazing feature; it has three doors mainly used for our entrance (and exit). Of all those, my favorite door is the one we mostly use, that could take us to the kitchen. Speaking of which, we have nine rooms in our house. Specifically, we have four bedrooms, two bathrooms, an average-sized living room, dining room, and of course, my favorite, the kitchen. Adding to that, we also have a concrete basement. Can you imagine how spacious our house is? But if I would be given a chance to re-model our house, I’d probably give much focus on the area of the bedrooms and the basement. And of course, the basement is too dark and horrible that a family of ghost could reside in it. Then there’s the hipped style roof, and I really like it because it’s an old look of the house and not a lot of people now days have that kind of roof. My house was made for one-family house because there are not that many bedrooms, or space; however, about a couple of yards away we have the 2 car garage and that’s not attached to the house. The important part is what about the people residing in it? I am so glad to have a complete family residing in our two-story house. I live with my complete family plus my loving grandparents.
In conclusion, I have realized that a house can be a place where you can treasure everything — old socks, delicious food, broken windows and etc. But most importantly, a house can treasure lifetime memories.
The one thing I like about my house is the location it’s a very nice, quiet neighborhood and the yard is really big, so during the summer I have friends over, and we go outside and have fun by playing sports and etc.
If I could change anything to the house it would probably be the bedrooms to be a little bigger although we have four bedrooms, they are too small for an individual. The basement, as I said, its pretty scary looking there right now and desperately needs remodeling.
The best memory that would be associated to this house that I live in right now, would be when we first moved in, my uncle and his family had to live with us too, and we all had so much fun living together because there where always so many people around the house and the time would go by really fast, just by talking to each other, playing games, and etc. So I think that would be the BEST memory about the house, when my uncle’s family and my family all lived together.
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